Bird on fire.

Category: Let's talk

Post 1 by Nem (I just keep on posting!) on Tuesday, 27-Jul-2004 23:49:02

I am warm. I do not want to leave my shelter, but I know I have to. Mother kept me clost to her at all times. Now it is time to make my own way. I streach my wings and legs, suddenly my shelter is too small for me. A little more pushing and I will be face to face with the outside world. I know if I remain in my shelter I will be safe. In the back of mind I know not for much longer though. I am afraid to face the world, I can hear all the sounds around me and they are frightening. Mother has gone to get dinner for my birthday party. I'm not ready I desided. What if the world isn't ready for me. What if it doesn't like me. It might devower me, just gobbel me up. I try to be as small as I can but my body wants out, even if my brain has a different idea. My heart beats so loud I am sure others outside can hear it. I heard the first couple of cracks and I shut my eyes tight against the world. If I can't see it then it's not there right? Cold, so cold, then warm. Strange, who would have thought. Slowly, very slowly I open one eye and what I see takes my breath away.

Post 2 by louiano (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Wednesday, 28-Jul-2004 14:21:31

s i c k!

Post 3 by Myr (Generic Zoner) on Thursday, 29-Jul-2004 18:14:36

I liked this one! a good metaphore

Post 4 by shaken not stirred (Veteran Zoner) on Friday, 30-Jul-2004 0:40:03

I like this alot.

Post 5 by Big Pawed Bear (letting his paws be his guide.) on Sunday, 01-Aug-2004 16:21:24

sick? I don't think so. intresting prose that.

Post 6 by bearj (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 04-Aug-2004 14:48:30

I think its cool. good way to descibe. lol